The Woods

Hi fellow bloggers,

I’m looking for someone to kindly read my first completed script titled The Woods. Everyone I’ve sent it to hasn’t found the time, is not remotely interested, or has been evading it because let’s face it: who likes to read nowadays? Fortunately for me, you guys are all creatives and some of you may be genuinely interested in having a look at it.

If you are let me know and I’ll send it to you.

What is it about?

A 10-year old girl is forced to move in with her estranged father when her grandfather and mother fall terribly ill.Β  As she adapts to her new life,Β  she begins to see paranormal things in her new house and in the woods that loom only a few feet away. Before she knows it, something ominous has gotten a hold of her, and she has to find a way to escape it before it is all too late.

(It’s not really that scary, it’s more so really really creepy. If you’ve watched something along the lines of Hereditary, Rosemary’s Baby, Suspiria, and the Witch, I think you would like it.)

I haven’t seen the newest Suspiria but that’s the one I’m referring to. I saw the trailer and its creepiness is something I was drawn to.

Now, I know many of you might grit your teeth at the idea of doing this for free. All I can offer back is my time. I’m willing to look at your very own work and give you feedback as well.





14 thoughts on “The Woods

    1. Your first impressions. What sounds akward, if dialogue could be better, if somethiing doesn’t make sense. And any grammatical stuff. But more so, what did you think of it and in what ways could it be even better than it already is… what character did you like, which ones did you not like and why. πŸ˜€

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      1. Alright. No pressure. Just shoot me your email and I’ll send it and you can read it whenever… Ideally you should read it before it gets produced… (lmao just kidding, who knows if it will ever reach the screens) How bout finish your edits for the story your working on and come back to me when you can…

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